Idea vs. Story

So my holiday break work is to take a bunch of great ideas and turn them into full stories. This is what I do more and more in the new work that I’m involved in. There’s a lot of smart creative people with great ideas but far too few storytellers and even fewer interactive digital storytellers.
As I struggle through this process I keep thinking about a screenwriting professor I had at NYU. He challenged us to come up with 50 ideas a month. At first I thought that was impossible. There’s no way you could dream up 50 screenplays in a month. But what he asked for was, ideas, not full blown screenplays. Ideas are simply the kernel for a larger story. Unfortunately, in contemporary filmmaking there a way too many feature films that are just ideas stretched out to a feature length without the storytelling discipline applied. This is emblematic of a lot of content creators. Let me give you an example.
An idea: A guy goes to the store to get a bottle of wine. As he leaves the store he drops his wallet. The wallet is recovered by a beautiful woman. When he meets up with the woman to retrieve his wallet they fall in love at first sight.
Not a bad idea. Could be a cute romantic comedy about fate and chance encounters. But it lacks any story at this point. To create a story from this idea we need to introduce some conflict, some drama, some emotional hooks, some back-story, some character arc and all that good stuff that we learn as writers. Unfortunately, in our disposable content culture few great ideas get this far. Here’s that idea pushed a bit further.
Story: A guy goes to his regular liquor store to buy a bottle of wine for his one year anniversary dinner with his girlfriend. Despite being a wine expert he asks the beautiful new clerk for advice. He tells the clerk that we has a special dinner with his mom who is from out of town. He takes the clerk up on her advice and grabs a bottle for twice the price he was planning on spending. Caught up in his crush for the clerk he accidentally leaves his wallet at the store. The next day, after a mediocre anniversary dinner, he realizes that he left his wallet at the store. His heart flutters with anticipation to see the beautiful clerk. He goes back to the store and the clerk immediately recognizes him as Mr. Chateau Pontneuf with the mom from Miami. The romantic connection is clear but is it worth cheating on his girlfriend?
Okay so still lots of work to do but at least we’ve added in some conflict; his moral debate on cheating on his girl, some backstory; he’s from Florida, some emotion; the crush connection between him and the clerk.
But I’m not just talking about film here. This discipline needs to be applied to anyone making content. Advertising creatives used to be called, “Idea Men,” but that’s really only a good skill if you only write headlines and 30-second TV spots. The real Mad Men need to create whole campaigns with multiple media touch points that all tell a great story. I also see it in the tech scene. There’s a ton of smart people with great ideas but they really need the mentorship of a VC to really draw out the larger story of their product, brand, business strategy and positioning.
There’s a lot of great ideas but very few of them make great stories and it’s really story that we have always connected with.
Okay enough pontificating and procrastinating, time for me to get back to work.

